Observation #3

I made several revisions to my paper to the version of my paper I brought to class on Monday. That version of my paper was all over the place and did not flow well. To fix this problem, I rearranged my paper. I first discussed the overall commercial, then I discussed how the images in the commercial developed the argument of it. I also included rhetorical analysis of the images. Then I went on to how the words developed the verbal argument and included rhetorical analysis of what was said. Then I went on to discuss how the word choice of the commercial influenced the tone, and how the background music influenced the tone. Within my rhetorical analysis, I put examples of ethos together and pathos together. When describing the overall details of my commercial, I included how the color affected tone of the argument.