Observation 3- Julia

After reflecting on my Visual Rhetoric assignment, I had a good idea of what needed to be revised in my paper. One revision that I made was to add more details to the observation of the advertisement that I chose to study. Because my ad was a photograph and not a commercial, it was somewhat difficult to add more details to something that was not very complex. However, after doing some more research, I found some useful ways to add details to my observation such as the colors used in the ad, how the audience would react to this ad, word choice, and other strategies. I feel that I made good use of rhetorical terms and also made reference frequently to rhetorical strategies although I could elaborate more on this as well. I also found that I needed to research more, not just use my textbook for reference which was a great asset to my revision.