Hey bloggers

I bet you guys want to know what I learned from reading your papers. Well I learned that organization is key to an effective argument. You could have the best topic in the world, but if your support isn't organized, no one will understand or take anything out of your paper. Also, I learned that personal analysis is very important in writing a paper on a small topic like this. There's no way anyone could bump out 1500 words by simply summarizing his or her 30 second commercial. In high school my teacher always stressed to not summarize but incite emotion in the reader with your own personal beliefs and "voice". In my next draft I will certainly incorporate this strategy.

I hope you guys have a safe Wedbesday
Love,
Steven

P.S. Tupac lives