Observation 3

Through the paper that I wrote and other papers that I have read, I was able to learn various aspects about effective argumentation strategies. The papers all have specific elaboration about the effect of different strategies that each student have seen through their commercial. These elaboration includes a great amount of details allowing their argument to be strong and critical. Details varies and includes analysis through color, music, word choice that has a large impact to the audience but could seem as if it has little significance. They also included several rhetorical terms and definitions to make their points stronger and allow their readers to understand their point of view. Structure for my paper was also very important. For my first draft, my main concern was the 1500 word limit, therefore I did not create a quick outline of my main points. My paper did not consist of an organize argumentative strategy. The main points that I have included were mentioned only at the end of my paper instead of adding it after my introduction. Therefore, most my revision were placing my main points in the beginning. Other revisions that I used was editing my sentences and paragraphs to allow the paper to flow.