Observation 3

It was easy to revise my rough draft for my rhetorical analysis paper ofter our class had met on Monday to discuss possible revisions. I wanted to make sure that all I had to say in my paper was credible and could be in fact the truth. I went back to my paper and made sure that I had definitions and summaries on the different rhetorical strategies and appeals. I had three main strategies that were incorporated into the advertisement. I wanted to make sure that all three of those strategies were defined in my paper so the reader would know what I was talking about and also would be able to comprehend were I was going in the paper. Also the rhetorical appeals were added to my paper after Monday's class because the appeals show how the audience can be effect by the visual text. I would tell which rhetorical appeal was developed through the use of particular rhetorical strategies in the advertisement. Each appeal was defined in my paper so that the reader would be able to understand my credibility. Besides definitions the arrangement of my paper was a big concern. It is important that the paper flows and is not jumping around to much. If the paper flows well then it will be easier for the reader to comprehend and not get lost in the writing. Those are some of the revisions I made after our class met and discussed on Monday.